okay, so you're nonchalant ([info]runpunkrun) wrote,
@ 2005-01-13 20:22:00
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Entry tags:fan/fiction, men of steel

Fic: The Milk and Cookies War
Author: Punk
Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: Clark/Lex
Rating: PG

Summary: Lex Luthor's Penthouse for Wayward Boys.

[The Milk and Cookies War]

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[info]agiel
2005-01-14 04:42 am UTC (link)
eheheheeh!

I cackled out loud. Thank you, thank you, *thank you* for your reliably awesome writing. I love your Lex and even I feel affection for your Clark. And! I love that the final straw for Lex was Martha's cookie. A masterful stroke.

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-14 10:04 am UTC (link)
Heh. Clark was standing there with his lips glittering with sugar and Lex just snapped. Took him long enough. *g*

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[info]linzeestyle
2005-01-14 04:52 am UTC (link)
Alright, that story totally made my day. I grinned through the whole thing - poor Lex being driven slowly insane(r?) by flirty, college-Clark. One of my favorite things about your fics are always the little one-liners, they never fail to make me giggle. For some reason this:

Lionel disconnects, presumably making plans to call up one of his other sons and tell him about invisible pig farming.

Made me cackle aloud. Thank you so much for posting this fic.

Linzee

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-14 10:09 am UTC (link)
I admit a special fondess for that line as well. I mean, c'mon! Invisible pig farming! Glad you liked the fic.

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[info]ladydey
2005-01-14 05:01 am UTC (link)
I just loved everything about this story. It was beautiful and light. Even so often Lex's love for Clark needs to be requited in light and laughter. really nice.

I love the Ren Faire Hell circle details - so cute Clark running to Lex and blowing his mind.

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-14 10:14 am UTC (link)
Thanks! I needed to write something light and romantic after my last fic, which was supposed to be light and romantic but somehow got away from me and ran head-first into the fields of angst instead. I blame Lex.

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[info]juno
2005-01-14 05:28 am UTC (link)
I love this.

I really like all the detail - how Lex knows what the scientific instruments are for. And why Clark needs out of the dorm. But I like the textures even more than the detail - the glow of Clark stretching and how much Lex longs for him.

I had the most sucktastic day but this was a happy surprise for me.

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-14 10:17 am UTC (link)
This was a fic about how sexy Clark is, so I wanted to get in as much stretching and eating and shirtlessness as I could manage. I'm glad it cheered you up.

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Hee, so fun
[info]astrea9562
2005-01-14 05:34 am UTC (link)
So cute. I loved all the details. Perfect first time. Heh, Lex is a little slow on the uptake, eh?

I laughed my way through this. Thanks so much for the happys this caused. ;D

*hugs*

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Re: Hee, so fun
[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-16 06:42 am UTC (link)
Lex is just trying to protect his big gay heart. Luckily he gave up on that and jumped Clark instead. *g*

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[info]sinquepida
2005-01-14 05:37 am UTC (link)
Sometimes, I just open my friends list and think, "Friends list! Entertain me right now!" And sometimes? My friends list does. This was one of those times. That was lovely, in the quiet, sure way all of your stuff is.

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-16 07:19 am UTC (link)
And sometimes? My friends list does.

I was *going* to say, I love it when that happens. But then LJ went down.

Glad you liked the fic!

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[info]musesfool
2005-01-14 05:42 am UTC (link)
Mmm...I love your Clex, and this is no exception. Warm, sweet, hot, full of longing. Great stuff.

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-16 07:48 am UTC (link)
Thank you! Lex was such a good boy. He pines so well. And has absolutely no problem ogling Clark.

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[info]lastscorpion
2005-01-14 06:03 am UTC (link)
What a wonderful story! Jeepers, Clark practically had to hit Lex with a 2x4 to get him to pick up on the blatant flirting! LOL! My favorite line was His second thought is that he's not nearly far enough away from Smallville if he's still hearing about pigs on a daily basis Terrific! I loved it a lot!

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-16 08:07 am UTC (link)
Well, you know Clark. He's always being super strong and super fast and hoping Lex won't notice. Lex was just worried Clark was super flirting and it was one more thing he was supposed to ignore. *g*

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[info]goss
2005-01-14 06:32 am UTC (link)
*grins madly* Oh man that was great! I haven't read a Clex story in so long. I love shirtless!flirty!Clark, poor Lex didn't stand a chance. *smooches you*

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-16 08:49 am UTC (link)
Who could resist Clark without a shirt on? Lex did his best, but he was never going to win that battle.

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[info]writer_azzie
2005-01-14 06:36 am UTC (link)
Clark is so sneaky!! Wonderful story; very cute!

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-16 08:50 am UTC (link)
Thanks!

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[info]tingler
2005-01-14 06:36 am UTC (link)
This was *better* than milk and cookies. Even Martha's.

Clark radiates understanding and broad golden shoulders.

Yes!

Clark looks down at his green John Deere t-shirt. It's tight enough you could take an accurate rubbing of his chest through it.

Milk and cookies with nutella. And bananas. And, can I do the rubbing?

Oh, very my.

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-17 06:12 am UTC (link)
You can try to rub Clark's chest, but you'd have to get past Lex first.

Thanks for the comment!

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[info]raincitygirl
2005-01-14 06:53 am UTC (link)
So, so deeply adorable and squee-worthy!

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-16 09:22 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]thecaelum
2005-01-14 07:08 am UTC (link)
*happy sigh* That was so perfect. I loved the way you steadily built up the tension and the longing so that when Lex finally jumped, I felt as if I jumped with him. Absolutely gorgeous.

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-17 06:17 am UTC (link)
Thanks! I really wanted to take advantage of their unresolved sexual tension and squeeze as much teasing and flirting in as I could. I'm actually surprised Lex lasted as long as he did. *g*

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[info]raucousraven
2005-01-14 07:15 am UTC (link)
So was this the one you were trying to name? Because it did turn out adorable. Also, your summary is genius. I am in awe of your gift for perfect short sentences, like discrete chunks of wordy goodness, here, there, all over your story. Consider Fig.1:

Fig.1: wordy goodness from punk manoeuvrability.
The doors close. Lex stares at his reflection. There's a bald man holding a cranberry walnut scone. He sighs and takes a bite.

Bald man angsting with scone: on Lex, it's really rather hot. I... don't know how you did that, but I'm impressed all the same. Let us not mention barely-of-age Clark with the shoulders and the ice cream because spontaneous combustion was not supposed to be on tonight's to-do list. Work was. But this? This is much, much better.


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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-16 09:16 am UTC (link)
This WAS the fic I was struggling to title. [info]iamsab kindly threw titles back and forth with me until we found one we liked. It's got war for Lex, very serious and dramatic, the way he likes things, and then the milk and cookies for Clark, sweet and comforting.

Thanks for the comment!

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[info]kitkat3979
2005-01-14 07:22 am UTC (link)
This was amazing. It made me laugh, even when the unfulfilled longing from Lex was painful.

When I read this line:

In Lex's head, Clark's message sounds like this: "Hi, Lex. Is it okay if I come over tomorrow and drink milk in your kitchen without a shirt?

I knew I was in for a good ride, and this certainly didn't disappoint.

Thanks for such a great fic.

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-17 06:27 am UTC (link)
I love Lex's little internal comedian there. Clark's so shirtless, and Lex is so confused and distracted.

Thanks for reading!

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[info]masscooper
2005-01-14 08:51 am UTC (link)
Mass spectrometers aren't boring, they're sexy!

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-14 09:50 am UTC (link)
No, see, I actually feel guilty for making Lex say that. *I* don't think they're boring, but I guess Lex just had better things to think about. Like Clark. On the couch. Next to him.

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[info]strangefrontier
2005-01-14 10:50 am UTC (link)
I'm a bit of a newcomer to the Smallville fandom; new as in my-obsession-is-barely-a-fortnight-old-and-keeps-me-awake-at-night-demanding-to-be-fed. Your fics were recommended to someone on my flist looking for Clexy goodness, and my gosh, daaaaahling, I love your work!

I'm at work right now, restlessly bored and fidgeting my way towards my coffee break. This slice of adorableness just made my morning - thank you!

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-18 04:24 am UTC (link)
And thank you for the lovely feedback!

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[info]buddleia
2005-01-14 11:25 am UTC (link)
Oh so so very good. Sweet and hot and happy, without being sickly. It's an ART you have. And I wanted Lex to accidently drop the scone and then pick it up and eat it anyway.

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-18 04:29 am UTC (link)
Clark put that scone in Lex's hand and then wrapped Lex's fingers around it. It was very important to him that Lex have breakfast. *g*

Thanks for the comment!

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[info]anitac588
2005-01-14 12:49 pm UTC (link)
*G*
Thanks for writing this story, I really enjoyed reading it. Clark was a shameless flirt and really, bare chest drinking was a low blow. *G* (which I'd take any time any place) "I got thirsty." Yeah, right, *snort*.

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-17 11:28 am UTC (link)
Hah. Clark just wanted an excuse to run around in nothing but a towel. He was getting desperate!

Thanks for the comment.

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[info]bravecows
2005-01-14 02:07 pm UTC (link)
I somehow psychically knew you posted a story today. GO ME WOOHOO.

And, ah, now to read. :D :D :D

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[info]qowf
2005-01-14 02:44 pm UTC (link)
That was fabulous and I don't even watch Smallville. Excellent stuff. I like Lex rearranging his priorities. That made me laugh quite hard.

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-16 08:54 am UTC (link)
Lex is nothing if not compulsively organized. Thanks for reading. :)

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[info]bravecows
2005-01-14 02:45 pm UTC (link)
Awww. Clark is a COCKTEASE. (These two sentences are unrelated, by the way.) I love it. (This isn't!)

What I like about your stories (apart from, you know, the overall total AWESOMENESS OMG) is that they always remind me of what I like about the characters. E. g.

Lex feels a rush of affection for Clark and his strange reliance on the printed word.

omg yes! And like, every time he has a problem he's all, "Oh, I shall read a book! It will help me Understand!" and it's all so goofy and adorable and earnest. Clark is such a superpowered teddy bear. Who reads! dawww.

And, uh. *wild gesticulating* I love it! Yay! Now I shall read it again. :D

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-18 04:35 am UTC (link)
I LOVE the way Clark immediately darts to a book anytime he wants to figure something out. It's so adorable. I just had to work that in here.

Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback.

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[info]rockthelink
2005-01-14 03:29 pm UTC (link)
That was so, so good. I loved it!

Lois is with Clark. Lex could be on campus in ten minutes. He could be enrolled in five.

Bwahaha. I love Lex!

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-16 08:23 am UTC (link)
Thanks! Lex is so jealous. But he refuses to admit it.

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[info]rose_etta
2005-01-14 03:43 pm UTC (link)
Delightful!

Poor Lex, not wanting to be another on of Clark's nameless one-night-stands, given diamond earrings by courier...

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-16 08:26 am UTC (link)
Hee! Imagine Lex wearing huge diamond earrings with that bald head of his. He'd be so pimptastic.

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[info]habit_rouge
2005-01-14 03:58 pm UTC (link)
There's something inherently wrong with contentment happening first thing in the morning...

You're aware that not anybody can get away with a *googles frantically* zeugma, right? That one is just sexy.

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[info]runpunkrun
2005-01-16 08:28 am UTC (link)
Oooh, I do love a good zeugma. Thanks for noticing. ;)

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